Susan DeFreitas

Susan DeFreitas is the author of the novel Hot Season, which won a Gold IPPY Award, and the editor of Dispatches from Anarres: Tales in Tribute to Ursula K. Le Guin (forthcoming from Forest Avenue Press). An independent editor and book coach, she specializes in helping writers from historically marginalized backgrounds, and those writing socially engaged fiction, break through into publishing. Find out more about her—and her first 50-page review—here.
Starting Your Novel With Plot: 3 Strengths and 3 Challenges
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Writers focused on plot are often strong when it comes to world-building and “big ideas,” but there are inherent challenges ...
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Starting Your Novel With Character: 3 Strengths and 3 Challenges
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Fiction writers who start with character, as opposed to plot or theme, have certain advantages—and certain challenges ...
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The Alchemy of Emotion: 6 Key Strategies for Emotionally Affecting Fiction
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To create the alchemical magic of emotion in your fiction, you need to approach the challenge from more than one ...
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3 Key Tactics for Crafting Powerful Scenes
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When placed intentionally, crafted well, and set up via emotional context and backstory, scene might be the writer’s most powerful ...
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3 Common Pitfalls When Writing From Your Own Life
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Factual details can be great fuel for your writing, but it’s crucial to recognize when adherence to them is getting ...
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Backstory and Exposition: 4 Key Tactics
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There’s a good chance that getting these essential elements right are among the biggest challenges you’ll face with your novel ...
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The One Thing Your Novel Absolutely Must Do
The One Thing Your Novel Absolutely Must Do
There’s only one thing that any novel must do if it’s going to succeed, and that’s arouse the reader’s curiosity ...
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Don’t Hold Out for Publishing to Make You Feel Seen. Here’s Another Goal Instead.
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Publication is elusive and in many ways out of your hands, but feeling seen is something that writers can offer ...
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Where Novelists Get Stuck: 3 Common Issues with Early Drafts
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Writing can be a lonely process, and it’s easy to feel stuck. Editors and coaches can help identify the common ...
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What Your First 50 Pages Reveals
What Your First 50 Pages Reveals
To gauge your manuscript’s pitch-readiness, turn a critical eye to the query letter, synopsis, and first fifty pages ...
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Developing a Writing Practice, Part 7: Engrained
Developing a Writing Practice Pt. 7 Engrained
The science suggests that repetition can make a new practice reach the “second nature” part of your brain sooner, creating ...
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Developing a Writing Practice, Part 6: Captivating
Developing a Writing Practice Pt. 6 Captivating
Employing the science of captivating rewards is one way to keep yourself excited about and engaged with a big writing ...
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Developing a Writing Practice, Part 5: Neurohacks
Developing a Writing Practice Pt. 5 Neurohacks
In some ways, the idea behind neurohacks is simple: Fake it till you make it. Or, fake it until it ...
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Developing a Writing Practice, Part 4: Easy
Developing a Writing Practice Pt. 4 Easy
Many dream of publishing a book, but actually sitting down to write one seems hard. Preparation and limiting your choices ...
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Developing a Writing Practice, Part 3: Important
Developing a Writing Practice Pt. 3 Important
A lot of the people who genuinely want to write a book never do so, because they never find a ...
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Developing a Writing Practice, Part 2: Community
Developing a Writing Practice Pt. 2 Community
Don’t feel like you have to go it alone—others are on the same journey, ready to offer encouragement and applaud ...
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Developing a Writing Practice, Part 1: Stepladders
Developing a Writing Practice Pt. 1 Stepladders
Studies show that making meaningful progress toward big goals is best served by focusing on the small steps that will ...
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How to Tell If You Have What It Takes to Succeed as a Writer
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A book is often the product of teamwork. The ability to revise—to accept feedback and apply it with diligence and ...
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3 Critical Things You Won’t Learn in an MFA Program
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Writing takes grit and so does publishing, but your odds are better if you understand what you’re up against. In ...
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When Your Query Reveals a Story-Level Problem
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When novelists struggle to pitch their work, it may have more to do with the book itself than the query ...
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What It Really Takes to Break Through with Your First Book Deal
What It Really Takes to Break Through with Your First Book Deal
In many ways, it’s never been harder to get a traditional book deal. At the same time, there have never ...
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How to Spot Toxic Feedback: 7 Signs That the Writing Advice You’re Getting May Do More Harm Than Good
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If you recognize the following characteristics in the critiques of your work, it may not just be inept—it may, in ...
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